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that was cool I wish that I could see something like that. i don't mean to sound insensitive to the sparrow, as I do feel sorry that It had to ...

Chapter 1: Confessions Dear Diary, I'm 14 years old and a freshman at Parkway South. you don't need to explain stuff like this to your diary! I don't really have ...

Hi, this looks good enough for a review! The ghost sphere gleaming upon his dark face, I hint of madness flashed in his malteeser eyes. I dont get it :( ...

Hi Pippiedooda, thanks for the PM! “Well I’ll take over now anyway. Have you given her anything to drink?” There should be a comma after "Well" * * * Once ...

hey I think that it's pretty good for a first poem for a speaker of another language. I think that the rhyming could be a bit touched up, and the ...

Hi, looks like a good story, I shall review :lol: I sucked in a deep, panicked breath and abruptly sat up in the bed I was lying in and smack ...

Hey, sorry but 10 is a little young for this site, I think that teh minimum age is 13, anyway, if you correct the date of birth in your profile, ...

Yeah, that's pretty cool, I just don't like it how you put the "I love the way you hug me daily" That just ruins the hate theme, I say take ...

Hello, Looks like i get to review first! I doubt Alison even likes Sam. She’s just doing it to torture Avril . To make her feel jealous. That’s the reason ...

Hello, :peeks in: looks like I get first review! First of all, your opening sentence. It didn't really do it's job, to hook the reader in. The air hummed with ...

Light and dark Black and white Time and space The joy of sorrow The Clapping hand Rejoicing times Never in sand So I see People in love The world above ...

Hi, It is a cool poem, but sadly you have failed as a poet. You shouldn't have to explain to us what you are talking about, and that is why ...

I have to agree with Tsun, this does sound a lot like twilight. also,i think that you got this the wrong way around: "No your not! Your one of them!" ...

Um mm, I'm not religious or anything, but I'm pretty sure that life just wants to BE , there is no purpose of life... "consider the lichen. lichens are just ...

But this isn't real For I've nothing to reveal This is really the only thing that sounded odd to me, having real, and then reveal... It's like not using the ...