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Hey! Thanks for the PM! I couldn't find anything wrong, you had me enticed all the way through... I can't wait 'till the next part! Keep going. The only thing ...

I'm trying to write something creative. Something original. Something nobody has ever though of before. Including me. ^.^ should be thought. There's school, of course. That's always a bucket of ...

Here's the review you asked for! In which we meet two men, the shepherd and the lamb. Hmm, not too sure about this. You should put it in quotation marks ...

Wow, okay long story, pretty impressive for your first post. Here is the review you asked for! Oh, If a walking stick could talk. If a walking stick could talk ...

The town school was a bus journey away from the peaceful rural area of my home village, to the grey dull buildings of the town. Not quite sure that this ...

Hi, here's that review you asked for! How was I such a sensation? This line has one too many syllables, you just have to work around that :] And you ...

Hmmm... I don't really get it!:smt017 She was giving her child away, but what's this about a parasite... Is the baby a parasite? Did he die of a parasite? You ...

Okay... I'm no dream expert, but I shall review! Just in the corner, a large, greasy cardboard box.. sanctuary. We climb in, Emily and I, and close the top flaps. ...

Hi, Looks like I get to review! First of all... when the delinquent THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE middle brother Charlie returns home. NewCharlie Hm, not sure if there ...

Hi, I will lay off the grammar, but I would just like to point this out. "Your , your not human." Hmmm... First of all, it should probably be something ...

is there any other secter than A & P? it just feels like there should be more... any way, the only nit-pick i have is this “Actually, little Jordyn’s going ...

Happy, happy, happy! That's the way I am, Laughing, grinning, giggles! I smile because I can! Love, love, love! That's my favorite thing, Hearts, flowers, chocolate! I swear, I could ...

Hello, I'm working through the book, I'll be done some day! I shook my head. Very very unlikely. Should be... I shook my head. Very[ comma ] very unlikely. * ...

Okay... the reviews are looking good. I'll have to start reading it then! are all of the chapters this long? that's probebly a good twelve pages or so. you should ...

EVERYTHING CAN BE EXPLAINED BY SCIENCE! [/rant] sorry about that, but I am a believer, just not of any real religeon! I love science, and I can truely say that ...