ashotto

Hey! Its Ash for a review.. This was a really good story. They way it was structured and paced made me want to read on and I empathised with the ...

Hey CateRose17, it's ashotto :) I loved this piece. One of my favourite things was the connection to Ed Sheeran's song (I LOVE this song), and the way you incorporated ...

This was amazingly written. At the beginning the style reminded me of a poem, the way you used such rich language and vivid descriptions was beyond captivating. There were many ...

Wow. This was an incredibly captivating story. I connected so strongly with the character but moreover I loved the way you wrote it the second person - unique but very ...

This was a very intense story. The suspense increased as the story built up, and I like the use of '///' in between time periods. Personally, I loved the first ...

I really enjoyed reading this story. Especially the way you started it out, describing elements of life that you notice and cherish was very well written. I think perhaps the ...

I truly enjoyed reading this story. The way you built it up, effectively using imagery that brought a sense of peace was incredible. Closer to the end of the story ...