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ashmel

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Memoir to memories

    Hey! Thank you so much for the review and for the correction ,I had indeed misspelt the word.And as for the word 'cringe' I did intend to mean 'cower in ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Memoir to memories

    Thank you !!

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Girl Interrupted

    This poem evokes powerful imagery.The language is simple and easy to contemplate.Everyone can relate to the poem as they would have crossed the phase of self contempt at some point ...

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Tsunami run!!

    Thank you for your comments and suggestion! I'll see if I can come up with a nice title.

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Two Faced World

    This poem is really good. The fact that you've stuck to the rhyming scheme in almost every stanza is amazing! But I really did not get what you meant by ...

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    Wow! This is a nice poem.The somewhat indirect nature of the poem makes it beautiful! I especially liked the way you concluded it!

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Tsunami run!!

    Hey ! thank you for the comment.

    Jun 15, 2013


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