ashleymreid

The questions that you have will be explained in further will all come to a close and you'll be suprised about the ending. I'm roughly on chapter 8 in reality. ...

I'm glad u read both parts...without reading the first part,it would be a little bit harder to get the second part..I'm glad you like the passage...I have more in store ...

Thank you for the review.And the helpful tips. I cant wait to upload more passages. -Ashley R

Sorry for the late response,but thanks for the input and suggestions.The reason my characters at this point seem to be acting unrealistic in the reader eyes, was to suggest that ...

Hello! ashleymreid here giving a review. and i found it to be a good read mainly because is was a short excerpt,making it easier to critique the story. i do ...

Thanks for the suggestions. i am working to make sure that everything works grammar wise. it was just a draft and i wanted opinions on the plot as a whole. ...

Really good poem.the word are does need some flow work like others have advise.but it's a great piece of work.

I' m glad you enjoyed!!! this wasn't a chapter just a summary,but i will submit chapters 1-3.