ashleymae

I was drawn to this when I discovered it, because, well, it is apart of the Arthurianna. I liked this chapter, but would ask that you try and expand some ...

I absolutely loved it! It was amazing. That is really all I have to say. I think you are amazing and want more to come from you! I especially loved ...

This poem you have written, I am, must have been personal for you, I can tell through your words. My only problem is that you used 'I' in the beginning ...

I liked it but I don't get the point of why you wrote it. Why did you? It did confused me, I must admit. What are your motives for Thy ...

I did like it a lot. Though, I must admit, I think it needs some work to make it better. All in all, it was good, just not great, which ...

I liked it a lot. You do have a talent. I really didn't see anything that needed to be corrected, so that was good. I liked the words you chose ...

I liked it a lot. You are off to an amazing start, but I regretfully must inform you that I found some flaws within it. But, over all, ut was ...

Loved it! It was short and message was recieved totally. I don't get why people believe that stuff happens, when news flash, it DOESN'T SO GET OVER IT! I also ...

I have got to say, it is great. But I must sadly admit that I saw some flaws in it as well. You had a few typos and problems with ...

Wow, isn’t enough to say what I felt when reading your poem. I loved it, there is no doubt. It also touched me because I personally fight for my happiness ...

This thing you have going on here is not just good, it is AMAZING! I absolutely loved it! But, If I might add, the only problem was the quotes. You ...

Remember capitalization! I have seen a few errors in that area, as well as spacing. In one part, you put the same word twice, which is uneeded. When you put ...

I just absolutely loved it! But, I unfortunately must offer you a minor correction; when there is a conversation going on, please make different paragraphs for each person speaking, it ...

I have to admit that at some parts I was so confused, but at others, I was not. You do have an excellent story, I should add. In my opinion, ...

Really? Where is it? The actuall story telling I mean. Do you really plan to get anything out of a one sentence thing? Seriously, you really need to post something! ...