ashleylee

This was cool and creative. I thought it flowed really well and you had a nice rhythem going there! Nice work! :)

I liked this. Especially the very last line: And I shall make it so that no more hearts are torn by your villainous claws. *beams* This was just a really ...

Oh! I liked this. I think you did really well for your first poem! :) You could definetly coudl feel the power and passion behind your words! Great Job!

I thought this was pretty good. There were moments were I felt the poem dragged a bit but otherwise, I liked it! Keep Writing! :)

I'm sorry but I guess that's just how it's written. Maybe if I continue it, I won't kill him! :)

Okay, I fixed the end of it so now there is only one plane crash. Also, I fixed some grammar things as well so hopefully it looks better. But if ...

Hey, thanks to all of you for liking this so much! :) It's great to hear when other's like your work. I agree with you all now that I read ...

Very beautiful! I agree with the above comments about that. It was simple and elegant. Well done! :)

i liked this one just as much as the first one. It was just a genuinely good story. :) PM me again if you write a third!

This was really just adorable! How everything just flowed really nice and the moment leading up to them kissing was perfectly written! PM me if you write more!

So many answers left unsaid! I can't wait until you post more! It is just such a high suspensful story, it keeps the reader wanting more. Nice work! :)

I think this is very powerful. A little flat at the end but otherwise, I really enjoyed reading it. It had a power behind it that the reader can feel. ...

Very cute and nasty at the same time! but i truthfully enjoyed reading it. It was such an adorable scene! Nice work!

Nice work. It was a really interesting idea for a poem. I liked reading and it flowed really well. Great Job!

I loved how you showed that love can overcome anything and it isn't just about all the beauty people make it out to be. It wasn't overly done either. Just ...