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Hello and nice to meet you, Nevermore. I don't think I have ever read any of your work before but your title caught my attention right away so without further ...

I'm back, Angel, for another round of review! And now that I have finished the second half of your new piece of work, I found nothing wrong! It was that ...

Angel, I so wish I could be on this site more so I could read more of your beautiful and talanted work! :wink: I should be getting around to being ...

The car I was now looking at was shiny, looked brand new and like it caused a lot of money. Should be "cost" instead of "caused" ~ ~ ~ ~ ...

February, huh? Interesting title. It definitely got my attention :wink: The cell-phone ringing woke me up; I knew it had to be him. I got up and felt a huge ...

Hello, Sakura! Unique name by the way; love it! I've seen that you've posted several chapters of this so far so I decided that I should start reading as well ...

Vampire romance, eh? My fav though I am not a fan of Twilight-fan-ones, but you said it wasn't so I trust you that it isn't. Hope I help! I opened ...

I haven't reviewed in a long time but your title caught my attention right away so I decided I should start reviewing again. Hopefully you don't disappoint :wink: He managed ...

Ethan's eyes were deep enough for any person, probably a lady, to fall in and get lost within. This is an awkwardly worded sentence. Maybe try: Ethan's eyes were deep ...

Back, Bri, for another review :wink: “He is arriving today,” Odette said. The secretary looked uneasy at me. "uneasily" instead of "uneasy" “So, do you know who are sparring against ...

Bri it is wonderful to hear that you are back. I've missed reading your stories so I tried to rush over here as quickly as I could once I got ...

Hola, mimimac! I noticed this and I love when people post random bits from their stories (don't ask me why, cause I don't know myself) and I knew I couldn't ...

This was really too short to give a proper review and I apologize for saying this but immediately after I read this, I thought of Twilight . This is a ...

This was lovely and very original. I have never read anything like it. I do praise you on your use of vocabulary. However, towards the end there, your beautiful plot ...

Angel, Angel... *shakes head with frustration* Will I ever be as stunning a writer as you? I can't tell you how often I repeat the obvious: your imagery is magnificent, ...