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Re: My letter
He told us to open our notebooks to a blank page and to start writing. He didn’t specify what to write about, just write . I stared at him as ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Jump
[s]Hey, Neena, can you remind me to get back to this. Like a PM or something because it looks really good but I have to go so I don't have ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough
Hey, Angel! I couldn't resist when I say that you posted a new story, as I just love your writing :wink: Here's the review! If Love is Not Enough By ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
THE MYSTERY OF THE GOLDEN DAGGER There was a Cold and Icy I'm not sure if you want to have all these capitalized if Cold and Icy are characters or ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - Chapter 6
Chapter 6 I wanted to bang the phone down the desk. I couldn’t, wouldn’t , believe the words she just said to me. “What did you just say?” I asked ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Darkness Chapter 1
I threw my pillow across the room and leaned over the bed. My hand shook uncontrollably as I reached for the gun. I gripped it tightly and held it to ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: One More Song
Leona Daniels bolted up in darkness, the alien shadows only adding to the fresh memory of her nightmare… Crouching behind the couch, watching her husband be slaughtered…the maniac’s eyes meeting
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: A painful first kiss
Hey, I'm here to lighten the mood, and let me say, just reading your little underlined blurp, you caught my attention. No body writes about aliens anymore! :D That's totally ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Goddess of Seduction
Here I am, Misinturpreted, at your request. Hopefully I can be of some help :wink: Your skin is soft supple and youthful. You must have been sent upon the wings ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Untouched-Epilogue
Does she want Nigel...or Jasper? I'm sort of confused. I though you had a really good ending sentence but this epilogue just bewildered me. I think you need to include ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 25
Wow, what jerks!!!!!!! I'm so pissed right now! How could Jasper do that to her? Feed her all those lies and then expect her to come crawling back!!!!! UG, I ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Bloodlust Chapter 1 part 2
Chapter 1 part 2 I woke up and tried to stand, but something held me back. All I could do was move my head so I bent it towards my ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: New Life: Chapter 2
-2- The Move The drive to the airport was mostly quiet. My dad hummed the whole way, it got very aggravating. I could barely stand the sight of him, but ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 24
WOW! You have no idea how happy you have made me! JASPER IS BACK!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D I loved him from the beginning and now he is here to ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 23
Yeah, pshhxhoney is right. I noticed spelling errors throughout this but I'm being kind of lazy...sorry :? But I will give you my opinion of this! :D First, overall, very ...
Oct 16, 2008
