ashleylee

[s]Hey, peanut. I can't give a proper review for the moment, but I will try to get to it tomorrow. Just save this sport for me, 'kay? :wink: Be back ...

All right, this was a cute concept pshhxhoney! :D I thought it was cute, in a cliche way. However, those are sometimes the best stories :wink: Now, I did notice ...

All right, I think the peace as been made here, so I guess it is now safe to critique :wink: hehe Now, Teddy, your story, so far, is pretty good. ...

Hello, Trikky! :D I think you commented on my blog when I was ranting and raving :wink: hehe And I don't think I got to say hi there so, nice ...

Happy Halloween By Angel of Death The smell of cigarette smoke caressed my nose, making me sigh. This was the heaven that I've been waiting all day to experience. Freedom. ...

Wow... what an intense statment. This was seriously so deep. I tried to write a poem with this kind of feel, like the insanity yet sane feel...? Yeah, but my ...

Mostly all the comments are pretty much the same as mine. :P You have a good flow, and good use of emotions and descriptions. Everything just pieced together perfectly. The ...

“Sam. About your cell…” Brown was having a hard time figuring out how to explain the circumstances. “What? Isn’t it seventy-two?” [s]She[/s] lowercase "s" on "she" asked. She looked at ...

Sorry vamp that it took me so long to get to this. But here I am and I'm ready to review! :wink: Hopefully this helps! Her eyes opened a crack ...

I found no mistakes, whatsoever, today, and seriously, jazz, I love this story. It's so raw and real, it's crazy. You write this from the heart of a girl who ...

This is my favorite peom of yours! :D I loved every sentence, from beginning to end. Even though it was shorter, it still was sweet and to the heart. Yes, ...

This was mighty good, spike! :D The emotions were real and the attitude of the poem very clear. I also might have caught a hidden message in there, about you ...

Here we met, The sun had already set. The air was romantic, and you were fantastic. I fell in love with you, Like two beautiful doves do. I gifted you ...

NOTE : Mahatma here means mahatma gandhi. To start out, I'm not sure who that person is that you are talking about so....ehh, sorry, I feel bad saying that :? ...

Hey, Spike. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Hopefully I can be of some help :wink: A feeling inside me swirls, Making me sing this song. ...