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Thank you so much! This is my first novel so I will be sure to check my spelling and grammar for my next chapter. :)

Thanks. I will try harder and edit the chapter so it does not sound as childish. God was a hard character for me because I found it hard to find ...

I will keep it clean, I realized once I have submitted that I have used words that aren't very nice. Thanks for the criticism.

Really love it!

Love it!

Awesome poem!!!