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I'm speechless, in a good way. The personification (is it?) really gives this piece a dark aura and makes it really mysterious. The last sentence just leaves a lingering effect ...

Okay, I hate to admit it, but you brought tears to my eyes. This...letter is truly touching. It broke my heart. I could feel the underlined innocence in those simple ...

Thank you so much!

Wow! I don't even know what to say. This left me completely speechless. I'm sorry for your loss. Truthfully, no matter how much I try to, I can never truly ...

No problem!

No problem! ^^ I'm always happy to help! You were right, I wasn't referring to the dialogues. Firstly, I would suggest you convert '3,000 ' into words. For example: You ...

Aw, thanks! No, I didn't :D Thank you! I'll get reviewing as soon as I can :)

Aw, thank you!

Wow, this is amazing! I love it. You've created such a meaningful poem. It's very heart-touching, and I truly am speechless!

I've noticed :) I'm really glad you did. Yeah, SushiSashimi333 mentioned it as well. I'll try and edit it as soon as I can. Thank you for the feedback!

Thank you for checking it out, even though it's not what you usually read. Your feedback has helped me very much. I now know where I went wrong, and where ...

Nice to meet you, SecreteJournalist (or Brie). Thank you for the welcome!

Haha, thank you! :D Yeah, now that you guys have mentioned it, I can really see where I went wrong. Thank you for giving my poem a chance :) Your ...

Wow, thank you so much for pointing out things I would never have noticed myself. You're awesome! I'll surely work on your tips, and improve the piece as soon as ...

No problem! I'm glad it was ^^