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Whew! I didn't expect that at all. Nobody lives in the house of Das family because it is considered to be "haunted" by the locals. This sentence means that the ...

That'd be cool! Let me know when you post it. :) Maybe 16 for Mature Content?

No problem! Glad I could help. :)

The reply is messed up for some reason. Sorry about that!

Thank you for such a detailed review! I appreciate it. I%u2019ll fix the nitpicks as soon as possible. I didn%u2019t talk about the mother before as I, too, felt it ...

It's much better now. Well done!

This stands as a short story for now. But, who knows, I may turn it into a novel someday. Thanks for reading! I appreciate your feedback. I'll fix the mistakes ...

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story. I'll fix the errors as soon as possible. :)

Sure! I'll read it as soon as I can!

No problem! I really enjoyed reading it. Ah, I see what you mean. :)

Hey! You could consider me a friend of @WaltzingDreams Here's the first part of this story: Hope you enjoy it! :D

I read the chapter again. You have removed those curly dashes, so the story flows smoothly. But, I have another improvement to give you: Try to make the chapter clearer, ...

Up to you, really. You're the author. :) If you feel it'll be better, add it in.

@focusedonwriting have copied the poem from @Deanie, its original writer.

No problem!