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Hello, I’m here to review! I haven’t read the previous chapters and, therefore, my review will focus on only this one. A wooden cabin atop a large hill. A kitchen ...

Hello, I’m here to review! I have to say that I have not read your previous chapters. Therefore, my review will only focus on this one. Belinda told the Jogger. ...

You asked for it. ;) He took her small face in his hands, her skin as cold as stone on the side that was untouched by the flames. 1. You ...

Hiya! I’m here to review. I haven’t read the first chapter and, therefore, this review will only be based on this one. It is the next day and are on ...

I’m back and ready to review! I am running so hard and loud How can she run hard and loud? She can run fast . Loud? She can’t run loudly ...

Hiya! I’m here to review your chapter. :) 1. Nice To Meet You I’d suggest you to put the title of each chapter in bold, capital letters, and move it ...

I’m back again! Hope I’m not annoying you. And the last thing I remembered before I fell unconscious Did he fall unconscious from the shock, or did something else happen? ...

I saved the image onto the camera, so I could further examine it at home. Before this sentence, I’d like a realistic reaction from Charles upon seeing the message, “Incorrectly ...

Hiya! I’m here to review. I felt like my nose had just been shocked by lightning. This sentence doesn’t make sense to me. What exactly does it mean? To me, ...

I love the format of your poem because it shows the negatives in our society. For example, "piece" is in bold. To me, it symbolises we're judged for standing out ...

Happy Review Day! I found the narration refreshing. It could be the details that presented powerful imagery or the way you cleverly developed her character through her interaction with the ...

Happy Review Day! I haven’t read the previous chapters and, hence, this review will only be based on this one. It's day eight of being in the healing rooms of ...

Happy Review Day! I haven’t read the previous chapters and, hence, this review will only be based on this one. Let me clarify, Billi’s a mutant goat? If so, how ...

Happy Review Day! I haven’t read the previous chapters and, hence, this review will only be based on this one. I’m rather confused as to what “eir” and “ey” actually ...

Happy Review Day! I haven’t read the previous chapters and, hence, this review will only be based on this one. I felt that Cora was awfully calm for someone who ...