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aristocraticuniverse

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Growth

    This is what I think the story of the poem is: One is hidden in the shadows by greater people. One wants to be like the important people, one wants ...

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Guild Of Thieves

    Should I pronounce the name Grenefeld like Greenfeld, or Grenfeld? It's a nice. name, Eleanor Genefeld, a lot like the character of my story, Elanore Greene. I like the idea ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: So this is the end intro

    I like the idea for your story, the apocalypse theme is always fun to read! I like the character Melanie Harper. I feel bad for her, for having to watch ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Other » Review, Realistic Re: Detailed Character Template

    I love this character profile! I use profiles with every character I come up with, and when I first saw this, I was just starting to get into character profiling. ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Shreds

    I like it a lot. It is a nice story, and though you made it seem like it would end happily, it was depressing. I would like to know if ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Twisted: Chapter 1

    I suggest that you work on spelling and grammar. I could see a couple typos here and there. I like it, it's better than some books I've read. Like the ...

    Jun 25, 2013


What will live longer, you or your words? Something to think about the next time you abandon a project...
— Omni