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Re: Growth
This is what I think the story of the poem is: One is hidden in the shadows by greater people. One wants to be like the important people, one wants ...
Jul 5, 2013 -
Re: Guild Of Thieves
Should I pronounce the name Grenefeld like Greenfeld, or Grenfeld? It's a nice. name, Eleanor Genefeld, a lot like the character of my story, Elanore Greene. I like the idea ...
Jun 28, 2013 -
Re: So this is the end intro
I like the idea for your story, the apocalypse theme is always fun to read! I like the character Melanie Harper. I feel bad for her, for having to watch ...
Jun 28, 2013 -
Re: Detailed Character Template
I love this character profile! I use profiles with every character I come up with, and when I first saw this, I was just starting to get into character profiling. ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: Shreds
I like it a lot. It is a nice story, and though you made it seem like it would end happily, it was depressing. I would like to know if ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: Twisted: Chapter 1
I suggest that you work on spelling and grammar. I could see a couple typos here and there. I like it, it's better than some books I've read. Like the ...
Jun 25, 2013
