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arianaSarroyo

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Lords, Give Me Courage...

    Hi there. I must say that I did like this experimental poem. It wasn't tok short or too long and was complete with stellar firgurative language. I liked your lines ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 1

    Hi! Ariana here with your review. I must say, I was impressed. This is a very eloquently written chapter. You use details like a master all while maintaining to keep ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Flight of the Phoenix

    Wow, you really have a way with words. I've impressed. What a splendid opening. You took imagery to a whole new, superb level. And I really admire that. Some of ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: The Begging Contention

    Hi there! Ariana here with your review. So before I dive in, I would like to inform you that you do not have to worry about this lovely work being ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    Hey there. Ariana with your review for today. Well what can I say? The title really lured me into the piece. I had my expectations when I opened this piece, ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: For S & K

    Hi there. Well I have to agree with others in saying that this is really sad. There is a message to it, but it is one that is bleak. However, ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: It's time to say Goodbye

    Hi there! This is a nice start-or maybe this is simply a short story. But anyway, this is a fine piece of literature. It's emotional, it's balanced in terms of ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Butterfly Peas

    This was very...interesting! Not in a negative way, but in a positive way. I wasn't sure what to expect at the title "Butterfly Peas" and I'm curious as to exactly ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poem collage

    These poems are beautiful, romantic, and descriptive. I can truly imagine what you've written here, and that's the beauty of it. Your words create such a soft and gentle love ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My People

    Hey there! I just want to say, this is very cute and quirky. And I sometimes wonder how cats truly see humans, as their "people" or their owners. I have ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Legal Meets Illegal ~ Summary

    Well then! Welcome to YWS. This certainly drew me into the actual story. Although it was merely a description, it was executed in a way so that it appeared interesting ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Pack - Prologue

    Hi. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I had this feeling that theee was something grim about this. Like an evil scientist or tales of some type of ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Art » Realistic, General Re: Sounds And Scars Of War

    Hello 5 there! What a lovely work of literature. I think that for the most part, this accurately illustrated the life of war. My only concern is with the layout. ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I wonder

    Hello there! Ariana again to review one of your works. This work, as with one I've just reviewed is simple, yet insightful. I notice that your poems are like that-simple, ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memories

    Hi there. To start off, this was a nice, simple read. There was nothing too conplicated-and that was the beauty of it. It was short, sweet and encouraging to read. ...

    Aug 24, 2013


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price