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Re: Lords, Give Me Courage...
Hi there. I must say that I did like this experimental poem. It wasn't tok short or too long and was complete with stellar firgurative language. I liked your lines ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Awake Part 1
Hi! Ariana here with your review. I must say, I was impressed. This is a very eloquently written chapter. You use details like a master all while maintaining to keep ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: The Flight of the Phoenix
Wow, you really have a way with words. I've impressed. What a splendid opening. You took imagery to a whole new, superb level. And I really admire that. Some of ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: The Begging Contention
Hi there! Ariana here with your review. So before I dive in, I would like to inform you that you do not have to worry about this lovely work being ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
Hey there. Ariana with your review for today. Well what can I say? The title really lured me into the piece. I had my expectations when I opened this piece, ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: For S & K
Hi there. Well I have to agree with others in saying that this is really sad. There is a message to it, but it is one that is bleak. However, ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: It's time to say Goodbye
Hi there! This is a nice start-or maybe this is simply a short story. But anyway, this is a fine piece of literature. It's emotional, it's balanced in terms of ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Butterfly Peas
This was very...interesting! Not in a negative way, but in a positive way. I wasn't sure what to expect at the title "Butterfly Peas" and I'm curious as to exactly ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Poem collage
These poems are beautiful, romantic, and descriptive. I can truly imagine what you've written here, and that's the beauty of it. Your words create such a soft and gentle love ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: My People
Hey there! I just want to say, this is very cute and quirky. And I sometimes wonder how cats truly see humans, as their "people" or their owners. I have ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Legal Meets Illegal ~ Summary
Well then! Welcome to YWS. This certainly drew me into the actual story. Although it was merely a description, it was executed in a way so that it appeared interesting ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: The Pack - Prologue
Hi. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I had this feeling that theee was something grim about this. Like an evil scientist or tales of some type of ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Sounds And Scars Of War
Hello 5 there! What a lovely work of literature. I think that for the most part, this accurately illustrated the life of war. My only concern is with the layout. ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: I wonder
Hello there! Ariana again to review one of your works. This work, as with one I've just reviewed is simple, yet insightful. I notice that your poems are like that-simple, ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Memories
Hi there. To start off, this was a nice, simple read. There was nothing too conplicated-and that was the beauty of it. It was short, sweet and encouraging to read. ...
Aug 24, 2013
