arianaSarroyo

Hi there. Ariana with your review, as you requested. So to start off, I really enjoyed reading this. This was a pleasure to read. Very positive, uplifting and sincere. My ...

Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I really liked this poem. I think you did capture the spirit of review day very well. Initally, this is ...

Hi there! Ariana with your review. So it seeems you're off to a good start. I like the concept here. I thought itt was very interesting to read about. There ...

Please put your poem back. I read the first few lines from the description and it sounds like a very nice poem. I don't know why you removed it. It ...

Hi there. Ariana here with your review. I have to say, you are off to a good start. But there were a few errors here, mainly puntuation, spacing and grammar. ...

Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I think you've done a pretty neat job here. I thought this was very eloquently written. You really have your ...

Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I thought that this was very interesting. It also made me very hungry. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. It was ...

Hi there. Ariana with your review. I like how you described the world of a writer a bit-it was a nice change and I felt like it was relatable. You ...

Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, you had a nice rhythm going on here. It made sense and it really added to the poem. Personally I ...

Hey there. Ariana here with your review. So to start off, I liked this. It was a nice little story. You caught me from the beginning, which is key. I ...

Hi there! Ariana A with your review. So you have a fairly interesting concept there. Oddly enough, I was just in a conversation about Amelia Earhart last week. So it's ...

Hello there. Ariana here with your review. So to start off with the positives, this was a pretty powerful read. Yes, it lacked detail and description to some degree, but ...

This is really cute! I don't really have any criticism for you. This was just a really cute, and like what the other reviewer said whimsical piece. This was just ...

Hi there! Ariana with your review. So to start off, I must admit this is a bit lengthy :-( But it was nicely done. You had some nice descriptions and ...

This was a cool concept and an interesting song to read. You had some spelling and grammar errors though. From the second t stanza, you used the wrong "its". The ...