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Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Hi there. Ariana with your review, as you requested. So to start off, I really enjoyed reading this. This was a pleasure to read. Very positive, uplifting and sincere. My ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: What day is it?
Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I really liked this poem. I think you did capture the spirit of review day very well. Initally, this is ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Living Weapons: Prologue
Hi there! Ariana with your review. So it seeems you're off to a good start. I like the concept here. I thought itt was very interesting to read about. There ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Trapped Between Your Pages
Please put your poem back. I read the first few lines from the description and it sounds like a very nice poem. I don't know why you removed it. It ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: The Prophecy Ch. 9
Hi there. Ariana here with your review. I have to say, you are off to a good start. But there were a few errors here, mainly puntuation, spacing and grammar. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Mourning after
Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I think you've done a pretty neat job here. I thought this was very eloquently written. You really have your ...
Sep 28, 2013 -
Re: Deleted
Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, I thought that this was very interesting. It also made me very hungry. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. It was ...
Sep 26, 2013 -
Re: A place for you.
Hi there. Ariana with your review. I like how you described the world of a writer a bit-it was a nice change and I felt like it was relatable. You ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: I thought
Hi there. Ariana with your review. So to start off, you had a nice rhythm going on here. It made sense and it really added to the poem. Personally I ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 4
Hey there. Ariana here with your review. So to start off, I liked this. It was a nice little story. You caught me from the beginning, which is key. I ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: Amelia Earhart Discovery (rough draft)
Hi there! Ariana A with your review. So you have a fairly interesting concept there. Oddly enough, I was just in a conversation about Amelia Earhart last week. So it's ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: Reminiscences
Hello there. Ariana here with your review. So to start off with the positives, this was a pretty powerful read. Yes, it lacked detail and description to some degree, but ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: A Cup Of Hedgehog
This is really cute! I don't really have any criticism for you. This was just a really cute, and like what the other reviewer said whimsical piece. This was just ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: Stalking- sometimes it's good...
Hi there! Ariana with your review. So to start off, I must admit this is a bit lengthy :-( But it was nicely done. You had some nice descriptions and ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: "Re-birthing"
This was a cool concept and an interesting song to read. You had some spelling and grammar errors though. From the second t stanza, you used the wrong "its". The ...
Sep 16, 2013