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Aw... this literally made my day! Thankyou soo much %u2661%u2661%u2661%u2661

Thank you! It makes me happy when anything I write reaches people, but especially this piece. Alice is my all-time favorite character and story. I collect things from the animated ...

I have to ask - are you an English major or related? You are brilliant in picking through and reasoning critiques to advance and hone in on the story. Also, ...

PS.. if you can or want to critique the whole thing, I would absolutely love that!!! I'm already looking back and tweaking some things that you brought up :D

Hey there! First off, I am living for this critique. I have been eager for someone to read beyond the prologue. I know that I am among the minority who ...

Yay!! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for this sweet comment :) :) :) :)

You're welcome :) I'm so happy I interrupted it correctly!!

You bring up good questions and points! I may have to revise one day!! Thank you for the review!!

First, I must explore The Rings of Power, as I have no idea what that is! Also, I will listen to the song you mention. Thanks for the recommendations, albeit ...

thank you :) :) :)

Yes :) I'm diligently crafting a full-fledged novel. It may be a while before I share further. I have a substantial amount of chapters written but need more in sequential ...

thank you for your review!! I deliberately included a prologue, even though it may not be the most common approach, as I find it captivating when books begin with a ...

Alpacaboss is my hero! I want to express my gratitude for your insightful review. You have a keen perception of where the story is heading, and I truly appreciate your ...