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AHHHHHH! This comment made me smile soooo big :) :) :) I've written poetry since I was very little so I have a litany of awful work LOL... It comes ...

TY! I don't usually read what I write aloud, but this makes me want to in the future! Welcome to YSW! Wishing you well :)

Fixed! PS... I have four more chapters, but they're not live... I may post them just for you to review and get your points! I have not written past the ...

I must say - you are my favorite YSW-er for all the time you are dedicating to this... :) I APPRECIATE YOU SO MUCH!!

I tried for the element of surprise, LOL... I have read many novels in this genre and the predictability or lack thereof between perspectives can either hinder or add to ...

Hey there! I appreciate your comment, as always :) :) This feedback here on YSW will help me when I get the spark to finish this story and go back ...

LMAO... can you tell I know little about coding??? HAHA... I tried to come up with a modern project. Maybe I will remove that sentence as I know very little ...

Your comments, reviews, and questions have me thinking! I guess with emotions, it's hard to describe them for me in a novel/narrative format. I tend to just go straight to ...

Chapter 1 mentions the city and university. I typically write poetry and am challenging myself to write a novel. I think the length is set up in terms of a ...

So you're reading this post revising and editing. I typically write poetry and challenge myself to write a novel. I suppose because I am unfamiliar with YSW, I post the ...

I adore your profile picture thing - sooo cute! You really get my intent behind this and your comment is so well thought out, and I can tell it took ...

Writing poetry without a rhyme scheme and rhythm is incredibly difficult for me. I find that the pulse of poems lies within that; without it, I cannot focus on reading ...

Okay... that last comment made me smile SOOO big! Thank you for that. Your kind words mean more than you know! MUCH LOVE!!!

Your poem ending was so cute. :) :) :) Thank you so much for this comment! Taking the time to read and review this is one thing, but enjoying it ...

Ahh!! So, it's been a few days since I logged into YSW, and your comment is one of several on this. With that being said, it's nice seeing so many ...