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Hi Alright I loved both parts of this story and think that it is an excellent take on the classic fairytale of Beauty and the Beast. There didn't seem to ...

Hi Right you need to use capital letters. My pet hate is incorrect use of capital letters - I have a friend who never capitalises 'i' just to annoy me! ...

Hi I officially love this. Especially, 'What on Mars is 'Hufflepuff'?" Anyway, I liked how you included Draco's love for Hermione and hatred for pretty much everyone else. You captured ...

Hi Right well this piece was very short but I will do my best to give a good review. My favourite bit was deffinately this line: 'Nature, regrettably, thought it ...

Hi First of all I liked this piece. It was something that I wasn't really expecting when she killed herself at the end. Right, now really the only problem I ...

I loved this and now really want to watch avpm again and avps and starship . . . I must agree with the previous comments in saying Voldemort was only ...

Hi I found this really interesting to read. It showed the belief of different religions all being just different paths to the Divine. It really is a lovely message to ...

Hi I enjoyed reading this piece because the reader was hooked almost as soon as they started to read. The pace was great too. Right, time for me to give ...

Hi This piece was really fun to read, I'm not sure whether thats because the kid reminds me of my little brother or not but I loved it. I liked ...

Hi Firstly, I love cliches, don't have any idea why, but this made your story perfect for me. Right, now I couldn't see much that I thought could be improved ...

Hi Island6 I love this, it makes a great first chapter. (It may help that I love Harry Potter) I liked that I can get a good grasp of the ...

Hi I'll start by saying that I enjoyed reading this. I think that it could be improved if you added more detail to the piece. Another thing I noticed is ...

Hi Twinkle, This was an interesting piece. As others have already pointed out the title is spelled wrong (that is unless it was for effect in which case its brilliant). ...

Hi catlover Another fan of the Warrior Cats series I see :) Anyway, onto the review. In this piece I couldn't find many if any gramatical errors or typos etc. ...