aooborromeo

Thank you for the review :)

Thank you for your review! The emotional detachment was intentional on my part for two reasons. So the narrator is a girl who's father was doing one of the most ...

That actually helps! Thanks

Anytime! You're welcome! I love the Greek Mythology references.

The villains were the idea of people that bully us or hurt us in life. The castle is the dreams or end goal of what we want in life.

Thank you so so much for this amazing review!!!! Everything you wrote really stuck with me. I love fellow reviewers who really delve deep into editing poetry. I do the ...

Thank you!!! This was something I wrote four years ago based on a true story staring me! I wanted to have people critique it because it has potential it just ...

Thank you!

Thank you for your review! This is actually based off a true story staring me. I wrote this four years ago, and I posted it because it has potential to ...

Fun Fact: It's a true story regarding me.

Yeah I wasn't sure about this one. Thanks for your review I really appreciate it :). The thing is this is a haibun I wrote four years ago. I posted ...

Yeah I started and completed it thirty minutes before class. Decided to be cheeky. It was the class favorite. I posted it because I wrote it three years ago. It's ...

Don't give up! You're very humble and talented for your age.

@veereen You're welcome. You're are without a doubt very very talented.

You're welcome! Btw, now that I take another look at your poem, I do notice the Tritina. Now, I'm even more impressed. I'm all for structure poems, and I applaud ...