antoanslavik

Hello there, I have to say that I really enjoyed your poem , but there are a few thighs you could do better. For one whole composition isn't really good, ...

This doesn't seem right... You like your sister, right? Please try something else for happiest day of her life. If you go along and do this it will be many ...

I generally like this poem . But there are a few things you should change : 1)you need to make every line about the same length as it would make ...

I like the concept of this poem. You are probably right about society. Generaly every single individual human is good but lie you said we put our masks on and ...