anti-pop

Yes, I'm actually writing a review! It's not much, though. My face is a mask, for the world to see. Caught up in secrets, that one cannot know. Giving false ...

Oh, my god. Wow. Just...wow. I was literally falling asleep before I started reading this, but you managed to completely capture my attention. I think the most attention-grabbing thing about ...

Hi, Mistress! Here by request :D Hmm...there's already quite a few great reviews here! I'll just point out things I notice as I go along...forgive me if someone else got ...

Hey Lupis! Here as requested :D Haven't read through this yet. Looking through the other reviews though, it sounds good. Onwards! The breeze, as it whistled past me, was wet ...

Hi Rob :) First things first, make sure you site that you used After Twenty Years by O. Henry as a reference. So, this should probably be in the 'Fan ...

I look out the window, and see you standing there. Wondering why you're here. This way, it's very rare. It should be a comma after 'there'. Also, your last line ...

Hi Moo! :D Through the trees, a stranger lurks, His amber fur a flame against the trees. Instead of using the term 'trees' twice in one stanza, try subsituting one ...

Hi God! Normally, I would point out little things like punctuation and spelling errors first. Then, I would give you an overall impression of the piece. However, with this piece ...

The love he shared at a cost Of all of those who which he lost Hmm...this couplet sounds really forced, which is a shame because you had a good idea. ...

"Good, Kates. If that's so, then mommy is going to go back to folding clothes." I think this would sound more realistic if she said, "then I'm going back to ...

A true fear- Was just realized. I'd take out the - Now I wonder how much I am despised This lines a little long; it is better off without the ...

Hi! I'm anti-pop, and I'm going to point out a few things in this piece. Also, instead of adding periods, comas, etc., I actually wrote 'period' ,'coma', yeah. That is ...

Wow. I couldn't believe she was blind! But when you go back and read the beginning of the story, it makes sense. This was really captivating. I can't wait to ...

Hi Ducati! :) Tell me I’m beautiful, And feed My appetites. I'd change 'appetites' to 'appetite'. Hold me Gently, And kiss me, Roughly. Come up with something a little more ...

Hi guitargrl :D If the world is [s]but[/s] drowning in a pool of cosmic emptiness, then shall we drown along with it? Or attempt to swim through the murk ? ...