anniegirl123

Thanks for the review! I went back through it and tried to fix most of the mistakes you pointed out, just a few of them I couldn't really change much ...

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it! :) And I made sure to go back and fix the typo.

Thank you so much for the review, it really made my day! :D

Thanks a lot for the review! I'm glad you liked it so much and that it inspired you. And welcome to the site, I can't wait to see what you'll ...

Thanks for the review! :D

Thanks for the review! :) I didn't feel like the reason why he was adventurous was important to the story, just that he was and it caused him to make ...

First, thank you so much for the review! :) What inspired me to write this is actually that I wanted to write a horror about something that is universally scary, ...

Thanks for the review! :)

Hahaha, I found this pretty funny! I liked how you compared the narrator to a sloth to show just how lazy he is, it made it even more funny that ...

Thanks a lot for the review! Sometime in the upcoming week I am going to try and do some editing on this story, so thank you for the suggestions! :)

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it so much. :D

Sorry for the confusion, I meant to write Suzie instead of Darla. I did some name changing after I wrote this and accidentally forgot to change that part. Thanks for ...

Well Angela also killed Adam at the end because he didn't love her back so it was one of those "if I can't have him then no one can," situations. ...

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. :)