anima9

PLEASE READ MY SIG ============= My darkest secrets will you keep I think it's supposed to end with a ? mark. Either that or change it to "...you will keep" ...

Well, they pretty much said what should be said. But in my opinion, I would probably title the poem "If I Were..." since you also discussed the other elements. Then ...

PLEASE READ MY SIGNATURE! ====================== I think the title refers to the fact that memories of someone keep distracting him that the author might have termed it "trespassing" since it ...

PLEASE READ MY SIGNATURE ============= This is a nice tribute for soldiers who fight wars for other countries. Although I wish you would do a little spacing here and there ...

@Critiq: LOL so did you actually read the whole thing before you wrote the review? You asked Have you read the Divine Comedy? I have a strong feeling you've read ...

wow. you really love this poem. hmmm...i'm sorry if i read it wrong. it makes much more sense now that you've explained it to us. maybe a little bit of ...

I felt somewhat lacking, and yeah the tenses problem also made it inconsistent. I suggest you make this one longer. Try putting more of how he got you to "do" ...

Oh here let me get those for you.” comma after the "oh" I had gotten out of a long relationship a year before we met I think this sentence's too ...

FIRST OFF: Read my sig please. ============== I stare at the picture on the bed It would be more dramatic if you made it "on my bed" :) I say ...

You go girl xD I've been reading this piece for a while but seeing that he hasn't changed even though I already reviewed his past works, I just grew tired ...

But that guy made one hell of a rhyme poem :) I like seeing poems I barely understand (or not understand at all) once in a while. Keeps me thinking ...

FIRST OFF: You MUST make a review of at least 2-3 works BEFORE posting your own. Otherwise your works will get unnoticed. I'm just doing this because I think you ...

You are fond of writing the dark side of humans are you? I like it. I also like writing dark poetry for it seems so real compared to the usual ...

FIRST OFF: You MUST make a review of at least 2-3 works BEFORE posting your own. Otherwise your works will get unnoticed. I'm just doing this because I think you ...

WOW!!! I certainly was awed by this! Amazing rhythm you got there. Even thought the pacing was slow at start, you nailed it just right down to the last line. ...