angelicahandover

I like this one more than the other one I commented on. ^^ It was full of emotion and I could already imagine the scene in my head as I ...

Hey there! ^^ It was a great poem! :D I really like your work! Anyway, here are some mistakes I found. (I think. :S) Now I must say fairwell, 'Now ...

Aww... It's a pity this wonderful story had to end. I really enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately... All stories come to an end. It's the sad truth. Ah well... Well then... ...

Great job! :) I'll crit another day. Sorry, I'm supposed to be writing a speech on 'Why I love English' for some competition that my teachers have signed me up ...

Haha. Hey, thanks! I just woke up thanks to this story! :) This really grabbed my attention. It seemed rushed, but it was good. Seriously. ^^ I loved it! :)

“Keep it she yelled back!” "Keep it!" she yelled back. Heart racing she screamed for joy. Rollercoaster were so exhilarating. After riding the Mountain Serpent a few more times she ...

I loved it! Please write more! Apart from a few mistakes that others have pointed out, it was a great story! I'd love to read chapter 2. Hope you post ...

I almost cried. Sweet and touching. :) I love teddy bears. Do you? :D Please read my story and comment. Thanks. :D