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Re: Christmas preparations
Hi GreenTulip! Amazing poem! I'll excuse your formatting since you were struggling, but it was great. I didn't spot many grammar errors or typos. You painted the picture beautifully for ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: Just One Night
Hi allanpxnnay! I like the emotion expressed in this story. It was very touching! However, there were MANY grammar errors and typos. The errors made the overall sentence structure a ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: Stermunflorkunson the Tinker-Goblin: Preface
Hi Glauke! I love the plot of your story! It was amazing and beautifully written. It was was very entertaining and easy to understand. The only thing I didn't really ...
Dec 19, 2015 -
Re: Unlucky Ricky
Hi XxXTheSwordsmanXxX! Amazing story! There wasn't one part that I didn't understand. It was well-written, and had a gripping storyline. I loved how the first sentence of the story was: ...
Dec 19, 2015