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No no l gladly accept the crlticism lol l juzt came up wlth thlz today. It's supposed to sound weird I don't want to give away what he is talking ...

Aaron always seems to be breaking Eve's heart. She needed to calm down and see it threw his eyes that was his 1st time cut him some slack. Couldn't find ...

It does need a lot of work :) Actually i made this for a fried to wake the em up to realty! Now that i look at it again it ...

Thank you and yes I was telling a story of a breakup. BTW found that pic on google.

Thanks for the suggetions I have no idea what you mean about A or B pattern. I just right poetry for fun. Just trying to get over some stuff so ...

Thank you for the feedback. I have no more work on the sight though ( poems). That was written over the course of last night around 3am

Can't find anything wrong here flowwed very well. Nice imagry and rythmic pattern.

l really dld love thlz poem. Because I can really relate to it because of my ex. And thats exactly how I feel like the feeling your poem portrays.

Marvelous as usuall. I didn't find any errors except for the one's already stated by the other members. 2 words though More please :)