My life the past few months....
Lonely
Twisted thoughts
And recollections
What the hell is wrong with my mind?
Insanity
Flash backs of absurdity
I dream of him
And think of you
Nightmares behind closed lids
Memories that can’t be rid
Truth behind these painful eyes
I want to see you die
Toying with my mind
Passionate last day
I guess you knew I wouldn’t stay
So you used me anyway
Still can feel the way you touched me
Every time I recollect it makes me feel used
Beaten, burdened by your resistance.
You never cared
Told me no tears should fall
That this was not the end
Life was just beginning
We would find someone again
But do u know what you did to me?
I was this close to ending it all
Luckily he broke my fall
Picked up the pieces of my shattered soul
Slowly I began to heal
Locking the pain with a seal
But even now you haunt my dreams
Never forgetting those memories
But till I hold my new found love
Everything will stay
I never knew the cost
When I fell in love with you
Now I wish I never knew you……..
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I can defiantly relate to this and threw out the whole poem I could feel the pain.
I especially like the way it’s laid out with the large space’s they definitely add to the way it’s written and the way it feels.
Thank you for the feedback.
I have no more work on the sight though ( poems).
That was written over the course of last night around 3am
fThis is a beautiful poem
I loved it.
The pain is evident and eloquently put.
However, it was kind of funny how at the end you say...
"Now I wish I never knew you...."
And your signature says....
'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at allm ---Alfred Lord Tennyson
Lol
I dunno, maybe its just me.
But I reslly enjoyed this poem.
I'm off to read more of your work!