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Re: I miss...
your welcome... :)
Sep 26, 2014 -
Re: Everyone was Dying but Our Love Wasn't I Think
your welcome.... :)
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: a thousand somersaults
I like the poem being short and is indeed really very sweet.I would suggest using a comma(,) instead of the semicolon(;) after sorrow in the third paragraph.I would also suggest ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: It is well.
I really like the way you have described the whole situation and I love the imagery.....nice piece of work.....very well explained.....keep on writing...... :)
Sep 21, 2014