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Hello dear, I saw your post, and so, here I am; answering your call. I enjoyed reading it to be honest. Your attention to detail at the start took me ...

Hey, You're poem is personal indeed. It is touching at heart and edible to the eyes. The simplicity of the words and rhymes are what make it enjoyable to read. ...

Hey, You're poem is original but poorly constructed. The structure in the stanzas is not a walk in the park, and it gets frustrating to reread everything in order to ...

Hey, You're short story is wonderfully constructed with an amazing attention put into detail; You made me aware of the time, setting, characters and feelings quite easily. Furthermore, you followed ...

Hello Shagy, I actually enjoyed it. You're poem is using an original approach which I have not encountered in a long while. The way you integrated Poker in your love ...

Hey, I enjoyed reading this. The piece is not original though, many stories circle the same idea. I liked how you took an amazing interest in detail, girl. The portrayal ...

This made me laugh so hard! When I reached the bottom where it says respective piles my throat just roared out with laughter. You had me with an open mouth ...

I really liked the disturbing images you portrayed to me. Although you had me lost at the start, it all then came clearer as I read further on. I still ...

Dear Astronaut, Your story is grasping the attention of my busy imagination. I really cannot find a better way to describe it. Though I have a few pointers. First, you ...

I LOVE IT! When are you going to add to it? Its absolutely perfect, I really cannot find anything wrong with it. Reading it from start to finish; I could ...

Well done, I quite enjoyed reading it. Nevertheless, the lack of detail won't be tolerated by many readers, not all have the ability to fill in their own details. I'd ...