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Anas Ahmad

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Daydreaming

    OMG! I'm utterly stunned by the story full of vivid metaphors and the complexities in it. Truth be told, the first part of this story deeply resonated within my heart ...

    Mon May 13, 2024 9:21 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Frozen Lake

    "Frozen Lake" by alpacaboss is a poem that captivates with its evocative imagery and poignant exploration of emotions. The narrative vividly describes a once-thriving lake that provided life to creatu

    Mon Oct 16, 2023 7:32 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lily's Pond

    Hi friend! The story you wrote is most exquisite story. The concept of this story is fabulous. You wrote this full of imaginary. I love the second Paragraph you wrote. ...

    Mon Oct 09, 2023 2:46 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: A Celestial Dream

    Your poetic work, filled with vivid imagery and heartfelt emotions, takes the reader on a journey through the realms of dreams and nostalgia. It beautifully encapsulates the essence of youth, ...

    Fri Oct 06, 2023 7:52 am
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: the curse of good memory

    "The curse of good memory" by farq4d is a profoundly moving and emotionally charged piece of writing. It delves deep into the complexities of memory and how it shapes our ...

    Fri Oct 06, 2023 6:32 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: catharsis (missing what's not yours)

    Your reflection on societal expectations and stereotypes challenges the idea of simplicity and conformity. It's a thought-provoking expression of individuality and self-acceptance, which can resonate

    Mon Oct 02, 2023 7:44 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Open up...let me see

    Part 1: In the first part of your poem, you create an atmosphere of longing and vulnerability. The speaker expresses a desire to connect with someone, knocking gently at their ...

    Mon Oct 02, 2023 5:07 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Biking Past the River, on Hills

    Your poetic expression beautifully conveys a sense of unity with nature, as you transition between being a bird, fish, and clam. The imagery of soaring, swimming, and the interaction with ...

    Mon Oct 02, 2023 3:32 am


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger