Hello , it's Shia here with a short review!
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Things I liked :1) the rhythm of the poem is really good. As someone who loves to read poems which have rhythm instead of blank verses I was deeply interested.
2) I truly liked the themes of the poem. The themes being a continuous flow gives the poem a good feel. The first parts coaxes the one behind the door to open up and let the poet in. The second part shows the bitter rejection and the poet's heartbroken response. Both emotions were held out very beautifully. Good job
Things needed to be worked on:
1) the title... Although the themes of the poem is eye catching but the title is somewhat not very eye catching. This can be a problem as many people read the title and if they find it interesting then they read the whole thing. It would be great if you come up with a catchy title which gives ideas on the main theme of the poem
2) a bit of background about whom the poem revolves on would be great for better understanding of the poem.
Overall the poem is really really nice. Keep up the great work👍
Points: 394
Reviews: 7
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