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  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Raining

    Hi! Okay so... This is a review. Here we go. This poem is very short and simple. That's not an issue, many great poems can be just like that. However, ...

    Sep 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Winter

    Wow! This is such an amazing piece! It almost makes me want to enjoy the long Michigan winter.. but not entirely hahah. I love the imagery you create. It truly ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: It's her.

    This is such a great depiction of the first stages of love. Its very sad, but so relatable. Anyone who has ever had a high school crush can understand where ...

    Aug 16, 2013


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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