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Generally I like this but honestly I'm really distracted by the grammar and spelling mistakes at the minute so I'm finding it difficult to read (even though it's short) without ...

Hello ☺ I’m Amie, and I’ll be your reviewer today! So I’ll just delve right into it. Firstly, this is reading too informally. I’m all for first person narrative, generally ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today... First of all this is a beautiful and very sombre piece. It intrigues this an experience you have went through youself? ...

I like this and I'd love to read your next installment. It's intriguing, interesting and written well. There are a few minor nit-picks and I suggest you read your work ...

This definetly has plenty of potential! You should expand on it :) My favourite line is "you're quite the disaster" I like that your narrator has quite a distinct voice ...

This is lovely and very relatable to a lot of people I'm sure! I think you could probably expand on this a lot. I don't know if this has ever ...

Hey I’m Amie and I’ll be your reviewer today :) First thing’s first – your spelling! Straight away I can see three spelling mistakes in the first paragraph alone… tomorow ...

Hey, I'm Amie and i'll be your reviewer today :) Basically, you need to edit this piece so that your writing indirectly, which means that your showing the reader what ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) So I'll just jump right into it... As I sat on the front step of my house, the wind gently ...

Hey there, I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) So lets get on with it... First off - It's a bit of an information overload in this extract. ...

Hey, I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) Ok, so first off I can see where you're going with this and it has plenty of potential. I'd watch ...

Hi there! I'm Amie and I'm going to be your reviewer today, so i'll get on with it... Every girl dreams of the big day - her wedding. Unfortunately, I ...

Hey I'm Amie and I will be your reviewer today... Lets get started then. Betrayal of ourselves and mind - I like the opening and the part that comes after ...

Hey, I’m Amie and I’m going to review your work today… ☺ Danny turned around and strode off. But before he had, I had seen the look of ultimate shock ...

Ok so just a few minor things to point out… ‘Nothing happened for a long two seconds in which I silently contemplated turning off the harsh lights myself, which was ...