amiemalamie

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing for you today. Overall, I enjoyed this. You've picked out some wonderful & recognizable moments, which help the reader to relate. I particularly ...

I too read this as a double entendre and I too am wondering if you meant for it to be so. I suppose it could be interpreted as your heart ...

Hey there, thought I'd pop over and review something of yours and I seen you had a fan of this so I fancied having a peek XD Play a faithful ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today. Lets begin... Well you certainly have a way with words. Very talented I must say! You're descriptions are so vivid and ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today... That night at dinner it was completely silent. I didn't don't think I have ever seen Austin so quiet. Finally , ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing for you today :) I don't think I need to bother with grammar and such as I think this has been dealt with ...

Hey I'm Amie and I shall be reviewing today. I'll start with some NIT PICKS... I'm not too sure if the first stanza is necessary. In the second stanza I ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer :) Firstly, this isn't bad like you said so don't sell yourself short. It does need work, particularly with the structure. I'm ...

I agree with the lovely reviewer before me about it being too long when it's so heavy. Also on that note, due to the heavy nature of this poem I ...

This is really interesting; I'm very intrigued and really want to know more, do you have more of this? Well-written, you have a lovely way with words. The only part ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) Firstly, well done with the rhyming :) Absolutely love the ending, so poignant and perfect for this piece! And I'm ...

This is good but I feel like it should be expanded. Or keep this one short and do an expanded version. I'd like to see it were you never actually ...

OO this is very intriguing, I'd love to read the rest of it! Does she have some kind of premonition ability? The only thing I'm picking up on really is... ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) I'll just dive right in... Firstly, the way you've wrote it at the minute seems very unattached, like you're listing ...

Hey, I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today... First off you seem so young to be writing poetry like this - so emotional and mature, not 'typical teen' at ...