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Re: At Temple's Fall
Hello, My name is Amber, I wanted to tell you that for your age this is really good. Even though you don't write poetry much it's really good. You know ...
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Annabell Lee
Hello, My name is Amber, I wanted to let you know that this is really good. I saw it playing out in my head, which is what I look for ...
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Follow Me
Hello, This is really good. As I read this I saw it play out in my head. It makes me think of a type of Native American poem. It makes ...
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: My silent school war.
Hello, This is really good. It makes you think about how kids can be. It makes me remember being in school. Also how they made me feel for being a ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: My First Spoken Word Poem (To my Father)
Hello, This is really good. I use to be that way. I made a plan to meet my biological one day, and he stood me up. So I know how ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: If I Could Go Back
This is really good. I guess everyone feels that way from time to time. Its just Luke the what if.... or if i would have.... But maybe somethings happen for ...
Oct 25, 2014