amberlemayy

Thank you for all the help! I struggle with commas and quotations sometimes, so I really needed that. I appreciate the time you took to go through this and make ...

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Hello! I really enjoy your poem! The message that is conveyed is absolutely beautiful, and I could not agree more with what you are trying to say through the words. ...

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Sorry, my computer is freaking out on me!!

Hello there! I really, really enjoyed the words of your poem! I think they're very strong, and I completely connected with what you were saying. I also enjoyed how you ...

Thank you!! I will look for those run-on's and try to shorten them up a bit!

Thank you so much for the review! I will go back through and look for those grammatical mistakes and verb tense errors. I was planning on having Maya talk about ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you got that vibe from Maya! That's something I was really trying to portray through her. I didn't proofread this very well, so I ...