amandahladik

I want more! This was a great beginning to the story. The point of view of the "girl" was very insightful to her inner thoughts. You get to really understand ...

This is great, You have great developed the imagery. The curiosity of the ocean did indeed plagued my mind, after reading this. I feel like this is the beginning of ...

Startling! How you described the "creature" was purely advanced. The story had amazing imagery, wow! I was given chills. I also like to write horrors, I find enjoyment of writing ...