alwaysjustme

You could make this poem longer but it's so sweet. I can relate! I love the last two lines. I agree with you that age doesn't matter when it's love. ...

Okay let me start by saying sorry for not reviewing this sooner and I might not be the best at reviewing. Anyways, I really liked the story. I think it's ...

I liked this poem alot. Very good use of imagery and descriptive words. I think it's a sad beautiful poem. The only thing I can say is I thought the ...

Hi I love this poem. I think your hard work definatley payed off. It's beautiful and intresting. I liked they rythem of the poem and I think you did an ...

I love the poem! I can't believe your just stratingto write poetry. It's a beautiful poem. It captured my intrest. I liked the rythem of the poem. My two favorite ...

I love this poem. It was unique and deep. I often wonder what's the meaning of life and why we are all here. What's the purpose of life? I have ...

I really like this poem and I could relate. I thought some parts of the poem didnt quite flow though. So thats the only thing I really think you should ...

I like the poem alot. Its dark and again like I have said before your poetry is unique. I really cant think of anything to change. I can relate to ...

I love this poem. It has such a nice flow. Your poetry belongs in a best selling book. Im captivated by your poetry. The poem is apsolutley perfect. I cant ...

I thought it was very good especially for a first poem. It had a nice rythem. Please continue writing poetry. All I really have to say is As I was, ...

Wow I like the storie and I think you did a good job of being descriptive and using imagery but I think you focoused on this so much that the ...

LOL This poem made me laugh. I defintley think Ive had a few teachers from hell and I know how you feel. Lol emotion was defintley there and I thought ...