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Thank you guys!

I knows, Lily! *is pounced on and hugs* Yeah, I wrote it in like ten minutes. It's all good. :P It has offically ended on Jen's time but the rest ...

I've heard about it; it's one of my favorite organizations. This poem was just a moment of weakness. Thanks, though!

Tiff, I love this. I have no real criqitue here, other than saying that I'm proud of you for posting this.

It's sort of edited. I'm in third period, after taking my exam, so I edited some of the parts and am working on the second chapter as I type this. ...

Thanks guys! Here, the use of the word “hook” is redundant. I would perhaps replace the first one with “grab.” That bothered me too. Thanks! You bring up the anxiety ...

You mean third person omniscient? The only issue I have with omniscient is that it can be hard to pull off. Besides, I think third person limited is two or ...

Thanks guys. :) I completly agree with everything you've both suggested and although I can't work on it tonight (I'm actually watching the Superbowl, as much as I hate football ...

Thanks Turntable Jack. I'm not good with grammar in poetry, which is why I rarely review here. I agree with your thing about how it starts to sound a little ...

Oh, sorry. I'm a little slow. :)

Hi Oliv. I promise to review this later, k? -Kat

I think I read the first book in sixth grade but I don't remember much about it. It's on my bookshelf somewhere so I'll have to go reread it. I ...

No problem; I'm glad to help. :)

I forgot about this for a while because I was busy and it was AngelCat's Dad's birthday so she didn't call or e-mail me to tell me to review this. ...

I'm working on reviewing it on TRC, Lexie, but it's slow going because I'm sleepy and chocolate isn't helping me wake up. :)