alwaysawriter

That would have been the ideal last day. But this is what really happened. No conjunctions. I'm pretty sure I've already lectured you about this so I don't think you ...

Hi HC, I'm back for the last time to review this part. :) And had, upon arrived at those great wooden doors that shielded the inside of the church from ...

Hi HC, I'm back again. Once again, sorry I didn't get to this sooner. that her face gaunt, that her face was gaunt, every tabloid had her “story”. The period ...

Hi HC. Sorry it took me so long to do this--I haven't checked my Will Review for Food post in a while, for some reason. There were no grammar errors, ...

Artemis Fowl by Eion Colfer (The beginning was too confusing) Old Yeller by Fred Gipson (Way too sad and it bored me halfway through) Twilight. (I'm sick of hearing about ...

Hi Jasmine. If I'm harsh, I apologize. You need to write two reviews per chapter/whatever else you post to be reviewed; I'm sorry that I didn't mention that in the ...

Hi. You've told me the (basic) rest of it on the phone but I don't remember it. Don't bring your brother to the library next time--he's an awesome little kid ...

I'm going to go through grammar, character, plot, all that stuff. He was headed in no particular direction, going no where. You repeat yourself here. If he was headed in ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. As Stella said, we have a 2 to 1 ratio around here. To make things easier, I'd review a lot before you post more. If you ...

Hi. I'm not sure if someone already answered this question but what they mean by Disney is that it's sort of little kiddish. Disney is known for having shows that ...

Hi. Grammar and Nitpicks feeling today Mr. Liftridge?" Comma after Today because there should be a should be a pause there. "Mm head hurt." Maybe try "Mm--head hurt?" Just to ...

Like everyone else, I really liked this. I had the same question about an apple rip til I saw your answer so now I've learned a new word. :) There's ...

I'm surprised, Heather. First off, it was okay. Second off, your Grammar Nazi best friend is here to point out your grammar errors. all these Capitalize All. But, all it ...

Your crazy friend here, who likes reviewing at midnight. :) Grammar and Nitpicks Carly didn’t want Since you just said her name in the previous sentence, you can go back ...

Hi Lurene. I'm alwaysawriter but whatever you want to call me is fine. Just a reminder--you need to post two reviews before you post a story or chapter (the same ...