alwaysawriter

Hi Teddy! I'm alwaysawriter but I have a varation of names so I always tell people they can shorten my name or call me Kat. I've seen you around before--congrats ...

I liked this. I can relate to a lot of the poem, especially the main idea of it. My favorite line of it had to be "It's my fairytale and ...

Don't give up so soon! As for the song, you have issues with grammar. For example, Without is one word, not two. Your should be You're because it's a conjuction, ...

Hi Amon360. I don't have much time but I randomly came across this and wanted to review it. I apologize for the harsh review; I'm normally much nicer than this. ...

Hi dustyblonde004. Welcome to YWS. My name's alwaysawriter, one of the many Instructors (people with purple names; our job is to give in-depth reviews and post writing tips) here, and ...

Hi Enigmatic. I'm here as promised. :) Before I get unto the critique, I'm sure you know about the 2:1 rule. You still owe two critiques from posting your last ...

Hi weekend__warrior. No one's reviewed this yet? :( Here I go: She was as short as Lieutenant Riley, but unlike his beige skin and dark brown hair, she was fair ...

Hi Hassan. Welcome to YWS. I'm alwaysawriter and I'll be your reviewer for today. Typically, I'd go and point out all of your grammar errors but seeing as that'll take ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. I think you mean this ( ), peanut? It gives you the basic rules, which includes the 2:1 rule (you need to review two other pieces ...

Hi Jasmine. run past the doors up to my room , and But , of course Try not to start a sentence with a conjuction. go along with [s]what ever[/s] ...

Hi Conrad. Here to review Part 2, as promised yesterday. It had just been a little more than he expected, heck, a lot more. To me, Heck doesn't seem to ...

Hi Kaylyn. This was short and sweet. I only found a couple of things: My other half , Derrick. They had told us that he would be at this camp, ...

Hi Jasmine. Constructive crit, here it comes! This is also a bit harsh so I apologize in advance. Reading through the chapter the first time, I instantly noticed this stuff: ...

Hi Conrad. It's been a month and a half since you asked for a critique from me; sorry about that. I'm slowly going through my critique list so I'm reviewing ...

Hi 1993vglad. I'm not much an expert on this sort of thing but here's my best try: Broken arms and broken bones is This should be: Broken arms and broken ...