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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i_cantgotosleep

    Ohh that does makes sense. That's a cool depiction of emotions for each part by the way YAY I'm happy for you! I'm glad you got better sleep :D

    Jun 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Reverie

    Thank you!

    Jun 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Reverie

    Thank you for your review! The acts are just my way of interpreting the piece part by part. If I'll base it on Lang Lang's performance, here are the corresponding ...

    Jun 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Reverie

    I highly recommend you listen to Reverie by Claude Debussy, preferably Lang Lang's version because it is simply exquisite. Hope you like the poem :)

    Jun 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Umbrella

    Thanks for sharing your poem! It helped me think how I can apply that trait in my writing too. Have a great day!

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Greater than you Think

    You are welcome! And thank you!!

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    No no it's okay and totally fine hehe :D

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    hehe thank you :D

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    Thanks for your review! It means a lot :> I'm glad you find it worth the read despite its length. Oh and the pastor didn't die because of suicide. He ...

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    :D

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    Thank you so much for your review, kind comments, and constructive criticisms! This really helps a lot. Yes, I actually did spent a bit (a lot) more time on this ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    Thank you so much for your review! Glad you enjoyed the story even if it is a tad longer than the works I write :)

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Duality of Humanity

    Thank you for reviewing my works as always! I really appreciate it :> No pressure on the story, too, I understand how school can take quite a toll on our ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Duality of Humanity

    Thank you for your review! Thanks for the encouragement, too :D

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Duality of Humanity

    Thanks for your review! I have to admit I made this in like 15 minutes so I apologize if it's messy BAHAHAH

    Jun 9, 2023


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien