alonush97

thanks for reading my story an yeah i know about the spacing it's just.... English is not my native language and i'll be more strict about it! The typos :P ...

thanks for the honest review i will work the corrections you gave me, and i know i need to work on my English especially because it's not my native language

This poem is amazing. The use in pain to open our eyes at the gloomy reality we live in is wonderful. I can see that you care a lot about ...

finally! another haiku! i write them myself and yours is amazing. the use of the element air is powerful. i seriously can hear the wind in the trees. generally i ...

your poem is extremely good. i love how you used your words to tell the story, you painted a picture. your hint of sarcasm is not too much' but it ...