alohajuice

Hey thanks for the review! I wrote it because I think it's an important thing that needed to be written. I wrote it specifically for the magazine, to get this ...

thank you everyone for your kind words and your help. i enjoyed writing this one and i'm happy to share it with the world.

two years later and this still gets a review! thank you rememberme. Now that I look back on this poem I know that I can make it better. Thank you ...

it doesn't matter if your comment is short. Thank you for telling me how you liked it and how you felt. I like when writing is able to do that ...

merci harshita.

thanks for the FB. i wrote it on a beautiful day =]

Thank you so much writeitalldown! I feel so honored that you feel that way. I really wanted it to connect to the general population, yet make it seem so personal ...

Hi! Honestly, when I first clicked on this, I thought I would see some poem expounding on how awesome Christmas is, lalala (no offense taken, I hope). I was pleasantly ...

Thank you all for your feedback. The inspiration for this piece comes from the novel Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli. I wrote it towards the beginning of summer. So the title ...

Thank you all for your kind words! I wrote it about that disgusting feeling one gets during/after a breakup. You just feel so disgusted with that person or with yourself ...

thanks for reading my stuff rememberme! You are soo nice. I need to review some of yours when I can. and thanks for helping me out here. I wrote this ...

"Either buying treats for himself or for the ladies in his family" is not only somewhat creepy (who calls the women in their family ladies?!) but it is also not ...

This is just awesome. Call me a geek, but I couldn't help thinking of "Supernatural." (Which is a good thing, by the way!) I like how it was gritty yet ...

My question is why would she kill him? Obviously she is crazy, but there has to be some reason behind it. My only hint of advice is that you make ...

brill that mate what? Wow, that's scary. And deep. I think you did a good job, next time I look in the mirror I'm going to be thinking of this ...