alliyah1234

Hey this is a really powerful piece of writing. I really like the short wording and sharp sentences. Like all the other people who have commented, you have absolutely nothing ...

This poem is really effective! The use of repetition has the number "2" lingering in your mind. The only one part I have something to say about: "anticipating when I ...

This is such an absolute amazing poem. It's so moving and textured. The funny thing is, poems are often really personal, and difficult to decode, but this poem is the ...

This is a really powerful poem! I love it :D Just two notes: - The constant use of "Your lying", it should be "You're" - "how do they fall into ...

I think every single person can relate to this poem. It really reaches out to a wide range of people, and shows that everyone feels and everyone hurts, even if ...

This is such a beautiful and moving poem. I appreciate the subtlety of your writing style. It allows the audience to interpret it however they may feel about it. Keep ...

This poem is so powerful, so moving! I really love your ability to metaphorically relate two totally different things, and make it sound so flowing! Keep writing, You're good at ...

Such an incredible poem with such powerful imagery. the only thing I'd change is the use of "things". Since this poem is so sophisticated and deep, why use such an ...

It's so incredibly moving and although as readers it is impossible to totally understand where it is you're coming from, we are intrigued and would like to hear the deeper ...

It's amazing how you have the ability to jam so much emotion into three stanzas, yet it comes across rather cold and hazed. I love your style of writing! :D

You have an incredible style of writing. Its not blubby or diluted. Its just original and straight to the point. I really enjoyed reading this :D :D

You are an absolutely amazing writer. This song flows so naturally, its words lingering on my tongue. Well, now I'm off to read the rest of your submissions! Great Job ...

I really like your style of writing, short and dynamic :D I've always wanted to write a piece for a band, but I myself am not musically inclined :L Check ...