alleycat13

I found this through Acoustic Sensitivity's link in the exceptional poetry nominations. I like it a lot, but I'm not sure if its "exceptional". The flow, the word choice is ...

Um, I don't read a lot of HP fanfiction, and this is the reason why. I quit about halfway through for two reasons-- 1. the story itself and 2. your ...

I agree with Snoink. It is a little all over the place. I'd go back and slim it down. All it takes is a little drink to take away what ...

I agree with Kyte--the language is a little dense. I also agree with Sam that this pretty awesome. I love the tone you have towards the piece. I have a ...

Yeah, I don't think historical fiction is the correct place for this, but I don't think book reviews is either because this isn't much of a review. Hum, don't know... ...

I think this is beautifully written. I especially like the first two paragraphs, with their comparisions and parallels of Reese and Sebastian, of the them and us. Reese's rant was ...

Well, as I my ambition is to become a veterinarian, this is extra creepy for me. With that said, I'm not too crazy about the content. Nel hit the dog, ...

Overall I liked it. It starts open really strong, with good imagery and focus, but at the end it got scattered. Why the coat? Why the woman? Sure, they're interesting, ...

I agree with all of the above. Yes, there's a little bit of info-dumping, but, as flash fiction, I think it is justified. I thoroughly enjoy your style. From the ...

I think this is a great subject, and I'm impressed that you actually wrote about man's morality. I enjoyed it a great deal. Although your poem is nice enough without ...

learn how to breathe fire like Dustfinger. I have almost figured out how to do the bookbinding, the others might take awhile. If you could learn how to do that, ...

hey, leave her alone, if she wants to like the Inheritance series, she can like the series. Oh, by all means, like them. I'm just letting you know that I ...

I thought it was/is a great book, but I don't feel it was the best way to end it. I can't think of a better way that it could have ...

I typically don't like to bash books, but this series so deserves it. They're poorly written, totally cliche, and the characters are all Mary/Marty Sues. Eragon was okay. I liked ...

It's time to return the favor. I also notice that you've run into a little hostility. Not fun is it? :wink: The message really speaks to the hopeless romantic inside ...